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arc chris
09-25-2008, 04:53 PM
A simple smile
A laugh
A hug
all of these will surely be missed.
a pat on the hand
a grin
a wink
for the last couple days
this made me think
of the person you were
how you touched many lives
though yours was cut short
the love that you gave us
could not be measured
you were my favorite uncle
sent to make our lives better
and know that your gone
we mourn for the little things
that you did in our lives
so we give you to god
may your soul R.I.P

For everyone that don't know who i'm talking about i'm talking about my uncle steve he was a awesome uncle but he did drugs and by drugs i mean he was almost high 24/7 but when he was sober (those little times) he was the coolest uncle you'll eva know we had our times together... This is also a reminder to you ALL drugs WILL and CAN kill you so... think before you do drugs or you'll end up like him.. Think not just about you but about others and what they have to go through after you died. RIP - Steve Bullis-
Suitcase 16
09-26-2008, 07:27 PM
Sorry for your uncle, great poem! 8/10
kuzmin
09-26-2008, 07:29 PM
Bad decisions :\ How old was he? It sucks seeing a family member die :(
Bodomchild
09-26-2008, 07:30 PM
sry about that i know how it feels. now bring pride to him by kicking a**!!!
Junko
09-26-2008, 07:31 PM
Aww realy nice peom dude(almost had me in tears). and im shure if your uncle was hear to see that he would be proad of you. :o
Punk1d
10-10-2008, 02:32 PM
I'm very sorry about your uncle(R.I.P) and very nice poem 10\10.
arc chris
10-13-2008, 02:10 PM
thx guys, he was 44 when he died, just 2 days ago one of my friends died, yes i do have an 81 year old friend, i was helping him because he was poor and couldn't afford anything (got rides 2 city for food) and i gave em food every sunday :( i miss the guys ~R.I.P HERSEY & STEVE~
pani
10-13-2008, 02:12 PM
Sorry for your losses mate. :(
arc chris
10-13-2008, 02:17 PM
thx dude means alot
Xenthosapien
10-13-2008, 02:27 PM
Sorry for your loss man. :(:(:(
arc chris
10-13-2008, 02:39 PM
Thx & thanks everyone for the support
X Blake X
10-13-2008, 02:41 PM
thats sad :(
Masterlop
10-13-2008, 06:37 PM
That was pretty sad. =(
Max
10-13-2008, 07:18 PM
Sorry about them both, but they are in a better place now :)
Qrat
10-14-2008, 09:57 AM
great poem, sad about ur uncle :(
R.I.P.
arc chris
10-30-2008, 08:15 PM
i am still shocked that he died & now its one of my good friends, that i tried to help also died recently
The Zaven
10-30-2008, 08:22 PM
Yeah, yeah, sorry for your uncle crap isn't going to make me compliment your poem.

4/10 it wasn't very good. You just bungled alot of sentences together and called it a poem.
Nottz
10-30-2008, 08:39 PM
I somewhat agree with Zaven. While i'm very sorry for your loss, im not gonna give you a high rating for touching my emotions.

4/10

(And you didn't need to be rude Zaven.)
X Blake X
10-30-2008, 08:44 PM
That's sad idk if i alredy posted but i thought this needed another...

-Ibrairiff
arc chris
10-31-2008, 05:40 AM
i just made this "bundled up sentances" when i was sad, so sorry if its bad
Nanoblade
10-31-2008, 08:15 AM
Sorry for your Uncle.

Poem could of been better though :)

-Luke
Dangt351
10-31-2008, 08:40 AM
sorry about your loss mate.

~Dangt351
619hit
10-31-2008, 11:20 AM
nice poem but sorry for your uncle.
Peehat
10-31-2008, 06:00 PM
sorry bout ur uncle

http://forum.travian.us/showthread.php?p=964976

kthxbaii