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Zaven89
10-14-2008, 10:44 PM
Kelly's Abyss by Levi

You see yourself in the evolution of fame
You start to live your moments
When I see you in the canvas
I picture you in a frame
When they ask your sacred fear
You speak only for the fame
You think it's just a game
Yet I am here to show you
The ways of the unlikely
When you want the attention of her
You always get put aside
But I am here to help you
Then I figured out your lie
My grace is always forgiving
It's alright, please don't cry
I am here to hold you
In my arms
In my time
In your abyss, Kelly.

This is out to Kelly, a girl I ventured to get to know. She is having too many life troubles to deal with any social problems. I hope this gets out to her.

K and O
10-15-2008, 03:42 AM
Not bad my friend.

Matthew
10-15-2008, 04:06 AM
Thats pretty good.

David
10-15-2008, 03:11 PM
Its good.

Good work mate.

pani
10-15-2008, 03:18 PM
Sound good mate.

Max
10-15-2008, 03:25 PM
nice, nice, :)

Asian
10-15-2008, 03:25 PM
very nice. i like.

Venom
10-15-2008, 03:26 PM
Very Good.

Soulblast9
10-15-2008, 03:27 PM
is it a poem ;D i dont like poems much but i did make 3 little poems on few lines today at school..-.- It sounds good dude :D

Jarodx4
10-16-2008, 02:29 AM
Good poem,were making poems at school at the moment!=]

I like yours better!!write more please.!

pure4lyf
10-19-2008, 03:55 AM
Wow! That's really something special! Kepp writing them!

~pure4lyf

Crayon Jr
10-19-2008, 03:56 AM
wow he copied and pasted you can tell he wouldent write in that font