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Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 12:56 AM
The New Comic Book

I stand here.
With over 40 other people,
Loud noises filling my ears,
but only good noises,not bad.
Waiting for the comic store to open,
Wondering what i could do to occupy myself,
for 2 whole hours......,waiting,for 2 whole hours,
I try lisining to all the sounds I hear,
my brain overloading with information every second.
Im at the back of the line,so i hope for the comic to not sell out.
People lining up in all derections,but just me,
waiting at the back,waiting for my turn.

619hit
10-22-2008, 12:58 AM
lol gratz.

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 12:59 AM
Thanks you should read/comment my other ones hehe

noobish noob
10-22-2008, 01:18 AM
Did this happen to you in reallife?

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 01:23 AM
no,I just put myself in that situation and writ what i thought in my head.

Stecki
10-22-2008, 01:31 AM
Not bad actually. Keep it up.

~stecki

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 01:39 AM
Not bad actually. Keep it up.

~stecki

Thanks,I've just started doing this so im just learning.

K E W L
10-22-2008, 02:01 AM
Its alright youre first go?

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 02:03 AM
yes Im just learning.