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Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 02:53 AM
As I log on,
my brains working in overdrive,
thinking what im going to do,
Skill?,melee?,mage?range?
which one?
My private mail getting spammed my noobs wanting free stuff,
feeling guilty not giving them anything,
reporting rule breakers,leaving the final say to the moderators,Ban or mute?
skilling's filling my brain with boredom,
Log out and go to forums?
So many options to choose from,
The great server,DODIAN.

I was bored so i decided to write a poem about my dodian life.

PureSkiller
10-22-2008, 02:58 AM
Shouldn't it be: "By noobs wanting free stuff" ?

Nice poem. 7/10

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 03:00 AM
Thanks,How many people can get literary artist?

PureSkiller
10-22-2008, 03:16 AM
Uuh .. I really won't kno. I think the TRUE artist under us.

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 03:28 AM
okay,thanks

A L T E C
10-22-2008, 07:28 PM
wow lame hahaha?? about dodian no offence 0/10

Xenthosapien
10-22-2008, 07:35 PM
Not bad. 6/10

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 11:52 PM
wow lame hahaha?? about dodian no offence 0/10

Lol a l t e c atleast im trying.

Blub Klub
10-23-2008, 06:48 PM
Didn't quite like it. 2/10 for effort though.

reporting rule breakers,leaving the final say to the moderators,Ban or mute?


that sounds too much like sucking up. Take that line out. Who am I to say you're a suck up though? But I'm just saying, it sounds too much like it.

Divine
10-23-2008, 07:02 PM
I donT like it much, but good effort, and nice choice of words=]