Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 03:26 AM
''Just wait here''Yelled mum
''But wait!!When will you be back?''I screamed.
''I'm not sure love,you will be safe were ever you go''
As mum runs of onto the big train im abandoned..
with lots of strangers,Even i don't know what someones sick mind is thinking to do with me.
I run,run like the wind to the local police officer.
''Sir!my mum has abandoned me!''
''Sssshhh!!im trying to eat my dough-nut can't you see!''
I'm walking down the pavement looking at the chewing gum stuck to the ground.
''Hey there lad! You looked scared?''said a stranger.
''m-m-m-my mum ab-b-bandond me''.......
Thats the end of the paragraph!
thanks,Jarodx4!
''But wait!!When will you be back?''I screamed.
''I'm not sure love,you will be safe were ever you go''
As mum runs of onto the big train im abandoned..
with lots of strangers,Even i don't know what someones sick mind is thinking to do with me.
I run,run like the wind to the local police officer.
''Sir!my mum has abandoned me!''
''Sssshhh!!im trying to eat my dough-nut can't you see!''
I'm walking down the pavement looking at the chewing gum stuck to the ground.
''Hey there lad! You looked scared?''said a stranger.
''m-m-m-my mum ab-b-bandond me''.......
Thats the end of the paragraph!
thanks,Jarodx4!