Medal Of Honor-war-poem!!

[Jarodx4]

Big backpacks filled with ammo,and first aid kits.
every step feeling like your back is breaking,
Running,jumping,dodging,trying not to get hit,
large blue skies filled with fighter jets,
searching for its prey,civilians taking cover to avoid the big rush of charging armys,
Solders fighting for there countries,
more importaint,there life.
loud howls coming from bunkers and half blown houses,Tanks serveying the area,looking for objects to blow up.
Boom!boom!
people die,people cry,awaiting the end,
theres only one winner,the strongest,smartest and fastest.

[K E W L]

Not the best 4/10 i liked your other 1.

[Lowlanderz]

I don't like it! I like your Dodian Life more!:D

[Sport plz]

I dont really like it. 3/10. :p

[A L T E C]

nice mate 2/10 not that great :(

[Xenthosapien]

Not all that great. 3/10

[Jarodx4]

lol, look at my other ones,Im just rying to find my umm ''motion''

[Suitcase 16]

I am a "Historian", I "Study" histroy, especially war. I really don't like this.

4/10

[toast112]

its ok 2/10
ur a historian? sweet.
im a surgeon. i study medicine.
not meaning to spam or anything else.

[Jarodx4]

hah its okay,cool medicin that would be interesting.

[Boylight]

Start was good,and i noticed 2 grammar mistakes.

[Bob Dole]

Like said before, I don't like this one as much as your others.

[Nottz]

Like said before, I don't like this one as much as your others.

Once again, I agree.

Why arent you on aim?