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A L T E C
10-22-2008, 06:24 PM
ON THE ROCKS Written For my Girl While our relationship was on the rocks

im serious girl, stop playin
you think that i dont, but i know what your sayin.
why you doing this? why you still playin these games?
deny all this ish, till I start droppin names,
come on your a big girl, take responsibility.
tell me straight up, you no longer feelin' me.
for real, time to pull up those socks,
as for right now, my love for you's on the rocks.

A L T E C
10-22-2008, 06:38 PM
.. coment.

Jesse
10-22-2008, 06:40 PM
This certainly is no form of poetry, Altec.
This is more of that "wannaberapwigger****" stuff.

Xenthosapien
10-22-2008, 06:41 PM
Not bad, A L T E C. :)
7/10

Edit: Yea, I agree with Benz, though. It is more of a song than a poem.

The Zaven
10-22-2008, 06:42 PM
More of a rap than a poem.

A L T E C
10-22-2008, 06:43 PM
fine ill start more poems ..

altec bank
10-22-2008, 08:01 PM
screw u....

lilfishy
10-22-2008, 08:05 PM
Whtlys a l t e c banned?

The Zaven
10-22-2008, 08:07 PM
Whtlys a l t e c banned?

Ripping.

Someone close pweeze.