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N o v a
10-22-2008, 07:51 PM
My submission for the contest, I lost =(. Please Google this though if you think I've ripped it =).

( It's a couplet )

Love

Love is an ocean,
set in place by motion.

Allegiance considered devotion,
abundant with emotion.

They are in-sync,
not separated or unlinked.

Unbroken hearts beat,
until a person cheats.

Mortal souls oppressed,
she's distressed.

Cherish love fast,
because love never lasts.
The Zaven
10-22-2008, 07:53 PM
Honestly thought it could have been longer. But it's 10/10 Grammer/Puncuation, and a 10/10 Use of words.

*Math*= 8.9/10
Jesse
10-22-2008, 07:55 PM
This makes my dingdong get big.
Xenthosapien
10-22-2008, 08:27 PM
lolz. Nice poem. keep it up.
Araf5
10-22-2008, 08:52 PM
wow, 10/10


EDIT OMG ITZ RIPPED HERES TEH PROOFS http://smouch.net/lol

^^OMG A GLOBAL MOD RIPPED!

:)

-Araf
Max
10-22-2008, 08:52 PM
Bcuz Nova wrote it it's a 10/10 k.
altec bank
10-22-2008, 08:59 PM
nice nova 10/10
N o v a
10-23-2008, 11:06 AM
Thanks...please rate it as if I were just a player and not a global, I want real ratings...
Matt
10-23-2008, 11:14 AM
7 / 10

I Like It Apart From This Line:

Unbroken hearts beat,
until a person cheats

:rolleyes:
Italy68
10-23-2008, 11:14 AM
Naisss work.
619hit
10-23-2008, 11:20 AM
nice work n o v's!
Copykitty
10-23-2008, 11:36 AM
Like it . :rolleyes:
N o v a
10-23-2008, 11:56 AM
Thanks, Matt I didn't like that one much either =\.
PureSkiller
10-23-2008, 12:14 PM
This makes my dingdong get big.

Lmfao.

Nice Poem Nova.
Boylight
10-23-2008, 01:03 PM
wow, 10/10


EDIT OMG ITZ RIPPED HERES TEH PROOFS http://smouch.net/lol

^^OMG A GLOBAL MOD RIPPED!

:)

-Araf


Lol,dont click on this webpage.
Remove this page.
mercenary
10-23-2008, 02:34 PM
I actually quite like this poem N o v a.

The middle sentences were slightly dodgey and didn't seem to fit in, however, the last sentence really finished it off and made it all make sense.

I think the beauty of this poem is the fact it's short, doesn't exaggerate at all and is easy to understand. Also, many people try to hard and then find themselves far from the actual point of the poem.

With this, you stuck true to the poem!
Bob Dole
10-23-2008, 08:45 PM
It could use some improvement here and there. I'm not too fond of couplets.

But overall great job! I was suprised.
I don't usually say nice things on the forum.