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pkerforever
10-22-2008, 11:08 PM
When you turn to look at me,

do you look deeper,
at the other side there is to see?

Many turn away and ignore us,
this just isn't working for us.
When people look at you and me,
they look at us like we have our heads in the trees.

Can we give it one last glance,
our love,
can we give it one last chance?

The way this works,
you and me,
just doesn't fit in reality.

I'm willing to work,
I'm willing to try,
to let us love,
not be shy.

When we're together,
we fuss and fight,
but then we go home and stay up all night,
thinking of the love that we could share,
if we only treated each other with care.

No matter what you say,
I will never,
let our love astray.

The way,
you and me,
is just the way,
it's supposed to be.

Trulyl3lue
10-22-2008, 11:11 PM
o.O Naice.

pkerforever
10-23-2008, 10:00 AM
Thanks m8.

HoocH
10-23-2008, 10:08 AM
Yeah it's really nice :)

pkerforever
10-23-2008, 10:10 AM
Glad you think that, put some time into this one.:)

Italy68
10-23-2008, 10:11 AM
Nice work.

pkerforever
10-23-2008, 10:12 AM
Thanks for all these positive comments guys :).