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Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 11:47 PM
Time flies by,
With very little stops,
our paths in life suddenly disappear,
when our paths come back,
life lights up,pleasured and happy.
we get closer,
to other people,
Our time will always be remembered,
almost glued to our brain,
what you said,I remembered,
those words will never be forgotten,
I care about you ever so much,
We have had our good times and bad,

We've been to hell and back,
But we always make it up to each other,

Will I ever smell you loved scent again?
I sit here,In the very spot we made true love.

-END

The Zaven
10-22-2008, 11:49 PM
Honestly I love your poems, although your taking up all of the board :(. So could you post all of them in one thread please?

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 11:50 PM
so should I reserve them?

619hit
10-22-2008, 11:53 PM
yup i am gone are you? nice poems.

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 11:54 PM
Nope im still here!hehe,Thanks.

The Zaven
10-22-2008, 11:54 PM
so should I reserve them?

Yeah, go ahead. When you have another poem just make a new thread, then reserve about 5 spots for new ones. And if you get more than 5 try to slow down lawl.

Jarodx4
10-22-2008, 11:58 PM
oK thanks for great advice.
Man!slow down!!!!!!!i love this!haha
Ill try make them longer and more ''in depth'' for people to in joy.

Boylight
10-23-2008, 12:05 AM
Smells like hotness.

Jarodx4
10-23-2008, 12:08 AM
I'd say! :p
Even if im not literary artist,Im still gona try my best to make good storys/poems