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Jarodx4
10-23-2008, 01:29 AM
Help
As the plane takes off,
I'm standing here,all alone.
I'm an abandoned child,
my eyes start to fill with tears,
knowing that the only time ill see my parents....
Is the picture in my head.
It's like I'm invisible,no one to hold me,
I need help,big help.
My mission is to find a family that cares.
My hands splattered with water while standing in the rain.
Is my life over? Will I ever be loved?
I can't do this to myself,
I don't know what to do.
-Jarodx4
Jarodx4
10-23-2008, 01:30 AM
Me and my Friends
Me and my friends.
We stick together forever.
If we were without,
we wouldn't survive.
Me and my friends......
Are like eggs,we crack,
but we always stick together
As I Sit Here
As I sit here,I write a poem,
a poem about life.
Life isn't all about surviving,
Its about being the best you can be,
Either in sport or education.
Friends,
You can't survive without friends,
they are your main source.
I sit here on a large wooden chair.
Stretching my back every so often,
My brain going into overdrive,
thinking what to write about.
As I sit here...
-THE END-THANKS -JARODX4
K E W L
10-23-2008, 01:49 AM
8/10
9/10
10/10
3rd is a amazing poem! i think you deserve literacy art reward soon!
Jarodx4
10-23-2008, 01:51 AM
Thanks for the rating kewl,I don't mind if im not a literary artist,I just like writing poems ae,Once again,thanks for the great ratings.
Boylight
10-23-2008, 06:02 AM
Poor child :[.
1ST poem is good enough.:p
niCestboy
10-23-2008, 06:09 AM
omg wats ur name? ill rpobly ready like a poetry book by u someday add me in game nicestboy
Dangt351
10-23-2008, 06:11 AM
Nice Poems!
The first one is sad :(
~Dangt351
Italy68
10-23-2008, 06:15 AM
Nice work.
Jarodx4
10-23-2008, 01:44 PM
Yeah,The first one was easyer than the 2nd and first one!lol.
Blub Klub
10-23-2008, 05:55 PM
3/10
4/10
4/10
Didn't like them very much.
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