The Ultimate Gift.

[Jarodx4]

I sit here,sit here looking.
Looking at one thing,
It's the most amazing thing.
The most amazing gift ever.
Its you,your blonde hair swifting in the breeze.
Your eyes,shining bright with those sparkling teeth,
What a perfect match.
The only thing that is better than you,
is two of you.
If i lost you,my life would be skin and bone,
with a broken heart cracked on the floor.
Me and you,never apart.

[Jarodx4]

ME AND YOU

We tell each other our deepest secrets,
When I see to sad,I have a set mission,To make you better!
We have good times and bad,but we stick together
We never let go through thick and thin,
In our friendship,No ones wrong.
If your heart starts to crack,
I'll be next to you to heal it.
If you leave me I would die in my tears,
Your a true friend,No one can take us apart.
Our friendship rings might be worth a lot,
But our friendship is priceless.

[Jarodx4]

This is my home,
A far away place up up the wonderful sky.
Up in the Grey clouds,No one holding us back.
Were I'm free,free of no harm.
No violence anywere,
because this place...
This place is Heaven.
In heaven,There are no liars,no yelling.
Heaven is a place to rest,to rest from earth.
It's like I am in a dream,A dream with no end,
It's called Heaven.

[Blub Klub]

Nice,touching,deep

3 words that describe them. =)

[K E W L]

Nice,touching,deep

3 words that describe them. =)

I agree :D

[Jarodx4]

I agree :D

Wow thanks guys,I was just doing these poems because I was bored but now that I think of it,Every time I go On Dodian Im just going to write poems.

[Nottz]

All three 8/10

[Experienced]

Yikes, don't double/triple post .. :eek:
But good job, I like the poems, nice time spent on them.

~Chris

[O l l i e]

100% Wimpy, Hahahahah.
Good Poem/s I Suppose.
5/10.

-Ollie

[Divine]

O.o very nice myboy.