Now What?

[Jarodx4]

This is it,
The last time i will see you.
I've loved bonding with you,
but now you have to go.
My eyes filling with water,
will I ever see you again?
So many questions,
just so very little time.
Our friendship has cracked....
But always heals.
When you touch me,
I suddenly feel more at home,
I wounder what it would feel like.....
When my mum touched me.
Bringing back memories makes me weep,
I wish mum never left me.
Now my foster mum is departing,
How could this be?
Will I have a true mum again?
Or will I be a homeless boy on the street?

-END

[PureSkiller]

Nice Poem. :]

[Matt]

Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee:)

[Blub Klub]

Honestly I didn't like it. It was boring up until the end. I didn't like you using the word mum. I don't care that you're from New Zealand or where ever. I still don't,and never will,like the word mum. I've always used mom and I don't intend to change.

[Boylight]

Nice rhyme.:p

[Jarodx4]

Thanks for the good comments guys.

[619hit]

yup i mserious now what? nice poem 10/10!

[Jarodx4]

thanks 619

[Dangt351]

Nice, I love your poems!

~Dangt351

[Jarodx4]

Thanks dangt,I love Your Moderating Skills!~haha