Hate (Short)

[Bob Dole]

It's free verse; keep in mind that it wasn't meant to rhyme.

I feel it growing
Profoundly inside me
You are the creator,
You’re the one responsible for it’s cultivation
It’s derogation, I need a reformation
The real me now hides below it
It controls my emotions,
My consciousness
It is my voice,
An impairment of the mind
My only emotion, singled out and burgeoned
Unstoppable, Impossible
Looming to my own defeat
Hate.

[619hit]

nice dude don't hate me!

[The Zaven]

Damn that was good. 10/10 Literature.

I give it a 99%, and that's good.

You for LA, well done.

[Nottz]

Great work Bob. Didn't know there was a literary artist inside you ;)

I suggest making a poem from the person who inspired the hates point of view. Sometimes poems inspired by other point of views are the best.

8.5/10

[Bob Dole]

Wow, thanks guys. :)

[Nottz]

No need for thanks, you did good bob, you did good.

[Bob Dole]

I have 3 more I wrote today. I'm going to post them all in a bit. They are somewhat similar to this one in style.

[K E W L]

I haven't heard a great free verse poem in a while but this 1 definitely takes the cake! 10/10

[chimera]

very nice one, 9/10. Talking about hate is not for me hehe.

[muslimz]

very nice one!!! 9/10! but its short

[Bob Dole]

Most of mine are pretty short.