You!

[Jarodx4]

You!

You,
you bring tears to my eyes,
Your the most amazing person.
My love you is so strong,
Nothing could rip us apart.
You and me are priceless,
I wouldn't sell one second of you,
not even if it made me the richest person ever.
Thats only the least I would do for my love.
How did you get this beautiful?
But the main question...
How did i get to meet you?
Are you my true love?
Your blonde hair swifting in the wind,
your eyes sparkling like a pack of gems.
I gave my all for you,
but you give back way to much,
If I loose you,
my life would have no purpose.
You my love,
are the best thing ever.

-END

[Bob Dole]

This is kind of just like a normal paragraph written across several lines. Focus on using more poetic devices, and don't forget to work on your grammar.

[Jarodx4]

Ok dude,thanks for advice but not to be gay but if you arnt gunna post happy comments please dont post...thanks.

[Bob Dole]

Ok dude,thanks for advice but not to be gay but if you arnt gunna post happy comments please dont post...thanks.
That is part of the reason people post stuff here. So others can give them ideas and suggestions for improvment.

[Jarodx4]

yeah,I know you dont like my style of poems but yeah.

[Dangt351]

I'm a big fan of your poems, I love this one!

7/10

(Write one about me :P)

~Dangt351

[Jarodx4]

hmm ill try,It'll be hard as!haha
Its like...
Ohh dangt,when i see you you make me sweat...ohh dangt hahahhaha jk.

[619hit]

nice you i.

[Jarodx4]

lol, thanks.