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Jarodx4
10-24-2008, 05:09 AM
Me

Slow wind breeze blows the swing,
the swing that I'm sitting on.
With my hands,
clenched around the chain,
keeping me stable.
I feel indestructible,
with the wind behind me
my blonde hair swaying in every direction,
barely missing the path of others.
I get higher and higher,
I never knew a swing can mean so much,
not only swinging high,
but it makes me feel alive.
It opens up so many paths,
my brain stops stressing,
I relax,thinking I'm laying on mid-air.
This can't be true,
the feeling is just superb.
Writing this poem,
Its almost impossible to explain.
I glide off the swing,
trying to understand that feel.
The most amazing thing of my life.

Dangt351
10-24-2008, 05:35 AM
I like this one, It has a certain "Feel" To it.

~Dangt351

Italy68
10-24-2008, 06:02 AM
Naissssssss

Jarodx4
10-24-2008, 02:43 PM
Thanks dangt and bloody

muslimz
10-25-2008, 08:35 PM
nice :D keep working!