Searching and another short poem

[Bob Dole]

Searching: (I don't like this one that much either)
A man of mind and wit
I seek the answers
Of life,
The unrelenting puzzle.
My fingers weave
Through the meaning of existence,
Yet every time I approach my answer,
Upon being gently touched,
I breath on it.
It is whisked away in the ever drifting stream of continuance
Leaving me with a lingering thirst
For something
As I see my desire
I fade away into realism.

Untitled:
The shadows of our unforgotten past
Coming back to haunt us
Our time
Doomed to repetition;
As the smog clears on the horizon
The same sun rises
The same day begins

[HoocH]

Nice :p

~ HoocH

[Italy68]

Nice work.

[The Zaven]

I don't like it personally. But it's a good thought out poem. 8/10

[Bob Dole]

I don't like it personally. But it's a good thought out poem. 8/10
I don't like it that much either. I actually put more effort into the shorter one at the bottom.

[xxmagex]

i dont like the first one but i like second. I would post on live support...but oh yeh you got me banned.

[muslimz]

i didnt like them but maybe other people like them 2/10

[kuzmin]

Muzlimz, your so negative on his posts, what makes your poems better than his?

[GfX]

I like this, the imagery.
It'd be exciting to see poems turn into graphical artwork.

[Archemedies]

The 2nd one I really like, but both in general are really great poems.

9/10

~Arch

[muslimz]

Muzlimz, your so negative on his posts, what makes your poems better than his?

idk i realy didnt like it... and i didnt say mine is better lolz...

[Bob Dole]

I like this, the imagery.
It'd be exciting to see poems turn into graphical artwork.
Feel free to do that ;)