Undereducate
10-25-2008, 03:34 PM
My first post on dodian as well as my release of the opener of a novel
-----I actually remember that day like it happened yesterday. The shrill terror that rode down my spine like a roller coaster. The aroma of burning flesh floating among the soot filled air. The way I couldn't see two feet in front of me. I had my right sleeve torn off from shoulder down and tied that over my mouth and nose to protect myself from any toxic chemicals. And I ventured through the streets of Beijing toward the evacuation point seven and a half miles from the disaster. But as I soon found out as I closed in on the point, what happened was not what I expected and I soon found out that I was not alone on my trip.
-----What happened over the Past Twenty-Four hours was horrifying. Before it happened thirty some military fighter jets, fifteen air force helicopters filled front to back with troops and hundreds of humvees went trough and over Beijing. Soon there after the radio informed us of a possible breach on the International Astral studies space station which at the time was supposed to be orbiting the moon. But due to solar tremors and our former planet Pluto's catastrophic eruption into a star everything was out of wack, even the night stars weren't visible all we could see was a murky purple glow. About thirty-five minutes after that radio broadcast the daytime sky was being torn open by millions of these small black specks, they weren't falling they were just floating there. I quickly went to the closest enclosed space I could find which was the nearby massage and spa building, I went downstairs and then it happened. Looking through the window each black speck lit up one by one and plummeted at nearly the speed of light and small explosions across the city were visible. In a matter of twenty seconds the whole city was up in smoke and I was out like a light soon there after.
A minor preview :]
-----I actually remember that day like it happened yesterday. The shrill terror that rode down my spine like a roller coaster. The aroma of burning flesh floating among the soot filled air. The way I couldn't see two feet in front of me. I had my right sleeve torn off from shoulder down and tied that over my mouth and nose to protect myself from any toxic chemicals. And I ventured through the streets of Beijing toward the evacuation point seven and a half miles from the disaster. But as I soon found out as I closed in on the point, what happened was not what I expected and I soon found out that I was not alone on my trip.
-----What happened over the Past Twenty-Four hours was horrifying. Before it happened thirty some military fighter jets, fifteen air force helicopters filled front to back with troops and hundreds of humvees went trough and over Beijing. Soon there after the radio informed us of a possible breach on the International Astral studies space station which at the time was supposed to be orbiting the moon. But due to solar tremors and our former planet Pluto's catastrophic eruption into a star everything was out of wack, even the night stars weren't visible all we could see was a murky purple glow. About thirty-five minutes after that radio broadcast the daytime sky was being torn open by millions of these small black specks, they weren't falling they were just floating there. I quickly went to the closest enclosed space I could find which was the nearby massage and spa building, I went downstairs and then it happened. Looking through the window each black speck lit up one by one and plummeted at nearly the speed of light and small explosions across the city were visible. In a matter of twenty seconds the whole city was up in smoke and I was out like a light soon there after.
A minor preview :]