"The next generation"

[chimera]

Aren`t we youngsters supposed to rule this world one day? How can we just close our eyes, and pretend that everything`s okay?

Is this fear to the next generation? We can`t just quit everything and take our vacation. Responsbility is a word, and destiny is another, we must start thinking, and care for eachother.

New challenges appears every day, it`s important to finish them, and not push them away.
Challenges plays always an important part, of what we can do if we fight and use our hearts.

There is not a thing that we can not do, we are the next generation, a mighty crew.

By; Chimera:p

[PureSkiller]

Mhmm, Pretty good. :)

[chimera]

thanks i made them when i was on school lolz :D

[mercenary]

Aren`t we youngsters supposed to rule this world one day? How can we just close our eyes, and pretend that everything`s okay?

Is this fear to the next generation? We can`t just quit everything and take our vacation. Responsbility is a word, and destiny is another, we must start thinking, and care for eachother.

New challenges appears every day, it`s important to finish them, and not push them away.
Challenges plays always an important part, of what we can do if we fight and use our hearts.

There is not a thing that we can not do, we are the next generation, a mighty crew.

By; Chimera:p

Lets quickly ****yse the poem then, shall we?

First off, you have to use an apostrophe ' rather than ` to denote a shortened word etc.

Secondly, your wording is very bad in some parts, look at the bold blue. Two 'important' next to each other, very bad choise, use a thesaurus when writing a poem

Thirdly, the mighty crew bit was out of place, really. However overall it is a good poem.

[Italy68]

It is good.

[chimera]

Lets quickly ****yse the poem then, shall we?

First off, you have to use an apostrophe ' rather than ` to denote a shortened word etc.

Secondly, your wording is very bad in some parts, look at the bold blue. Two 'important' next to each other, very bad choise, use a thesaurus when writing a poem

Thirdly, the mighty crew bit was out of place, really. However overall it is a good poem.

Thanks hehe i gonna work to be better ;P

[muslimz]

very nice one, if u want me and you can make a poem :D