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muslimz
10-25-2008, 05:47 PM
Peace is freedom and hope,
hope that some day there will be peace,
peace between everyone
on earth.

Peace is hope an faith.
Peace is our children,
children that need a place to be.

Peace is the faith in somthing good.
Peace is friendship,
the friendship that combune us all.

Peace is to hear the birds twitter,
Peace is a hug,
a kiss,
and a Hi!

Peace makes this
world a place to be.

Don't be silly enough to kill it.

Maby one day there will be peace,
a dream for everyone,
to say that we're free.

It's a dream that one day
the war will end,
and we all can live in peace!

The Zaven
10-25-2008, 05:48 PM
Barely any literature at all. Meh, 3/10

muslimz
10-25-2008, 05:59 PM
thanks but i think i dont need ur reply... a teacher said this was best poem she saw... and a little kid like u say 3/10? wtf....

The Zaven
10-25-2008, 06:01 PM
thanks but i think i dont need ur reply... a teacher said this was best poem she saw... and a little kid like u say 3/10? wtf....

Yes a teacher in 3rd grade would compliment such excellence.

muslimz
10-25-2008, 06:03 PM
Yes a teacher in 3rd grade would compliment such excellence.

just dont watch my poems more ok? i dont realy like your reply...