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Wiz
10-25-2008, 05:40 PM
The somber waves of what was lingers
Your touch of immortal hate still haunts the ever present memory
Your sins scorch the soul of the world and of that of man
Why did you get so many chances to do right but inevitably, do wrong?
Why does your memory still haunt the memories of those who cared?
The effects of what you caused, and of what you did, are unspoken
No one dares mention your name in conversation in fear of rallying the
anger within
But of sadness as well

It was foretold that men like you would populate the world
Men whose only reason was to watch the world burn when they lit the first match
Men who cackled in the face of empathy and remorse
Men who did not feel the embracing emotions or of love
It was not your fault however, for the one that gave the book of matches
Is the one that started it all

kuzmin
10-25-2008, 05:42 PM
Pretty good. Going for literature artist?

aharper
10-25-2008, 05:43 PM
Dude thats great keep up the good work

Bob Dole
10-25-2008, 05:43 PM
Very good :)

The Zaven
10-25-2008, 05:44 PM
:O:O

Wiz that was, ****ING GREAT.

9.99999999999999/10 nub

Wiz
10-25-2008, 05:47 PM
Thanks :) and for those wondering, this is about my father. And no, I'm not going to explain it.

Bob Dole
10-25-2008, 05:48 PM
Write more.
I want to read more of your work.
It's so amazing.

Arsenal
10-25-2008, 05:51 PM
Well that's 1 for you Wiz. Better think of something to do. =S

Wiz
10-25-2008, 05:53 PM
Meh, I'll write another one that's not so depressing and **** later. And just to point something out, I wrote this when I was COMPLETELY bored out of my ****ing mind and had nothing better to do lol.

Bob Dole
10-25-2008, 05:55 PM
Yeah thats how I wrote my only good one. Looking forward for your next one.

muslimz
10-25-2008, 06:06 PM
very nice one, i hope you make more :D

shadow8564
10-25-2008, 09:47 PM
lol great, great work :D

619hit
10-25-2008, 09:48 PM
nice skillz you got there!