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Archemedies
10-25-2008, 09:53 PM
Clenching my face, I stare into life
Wonderful, joyful, and dark.

Why are we here?
What purpose do we serve?
Is it only me that has these thoughts so absurd?

No, it can't just be me
All of us, so filled with hatred
We must protect that which cannot be free.

Thoughts like rivers flowing strong
Endless sorrow, though nothing is wrong.

Clenching my face, I see no fright
We all are one, family alike
The path I've chosen, is the one I start tonight.



Wrote this beast in 15 minutes. Constructive criticism is much obliged.

~Arch

muslimz
10-25-2008, 09:57 PM
Nice work. Keep it up =)

Dangt351
10-25-2008, 10:22 PM
Really Nice, We want more!!!!

8/10

~Dangt351