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muslimz
10-26-2008, 01:29 PM
Do you believe in ghosts? I, do. I met one, The Blue Ghost.
Here's the story:
I walked down the Park Avenue at six o' clock, to meet Paul. He was eleven at that time. I went into the garden, and up to the door, and rang the bell. Nobody answered. I rang again. Now, I heard a noise. I tried to look into one of the windows, but couldn't see anything, because the curtains were not redrawn. I turned around to walk away; suddenly somebody was yelling my name.

It was Paul standing on the balcony looking down at me.

He was shivering and looked pail, and scared. I tried to talk to him, but he didn't take notice of me. I wondered why he had yelled for me. I tried to open the door, but it was closed. Maybe the key was under the carpet, which was lying by the door. I moved the carpet, and there it was. I opened the door, ran up the stairs, and went out the door to the balcony. I grabbed Paul and dragged him in. He looked like he was lost in another kingdom. He still shelved.
" What's the matter? It looks like you've seen a ghost!!" I said.
"A ghost? Where?" Paul looked around in the room.
"No, it isn't any ghost here, but you look like one yourself!"
"I have seen a ghost!!" Paul cried
"Paul! Don't be silly, there is no such things as ghosts!"
"Yes, but it is! A blue one to!" said Paul, while he still shivered.
"Oh yeah? Can you tell me where it is??" I asked.
"No, it flied away, it was the blue ghost that yelled your name, not me!"
"How did the ghost know my name?" I asked. I was starting to believe Paul.
"How should I know?"
"Yeah, how should you know?"
"So, you believe me then?" Paul looked at me with begging eyes.
"Yes, yes Paul I believe in you."
Paul got happy, he didn't believe it was true. But hey, what are friends for?

I asked him why the ghost came to him. He didn't know. He had been to a cave where it was a chain, witch he had taken with him, but the blue ghost had taken it, so that must be why it came to him. The ghost has to be in that cave now.

Paul and I went to the cave. Paul took up a flashlight from his bag. We walked very quiet into the cave. It was so creepy I had to hide behind Paul.
"Do you think it's in here?" asked Paul
"Yes, but I don't hope so." I said.
Suddenly something flew right over us. Both of us fell down to the ground.
It was only some bats. We walked further into the cave. We heard a sound.
"No, it's probably some bats again." Said Paul.
"I, I, I, don't think so Paul." I said.
"Run for your live!" we yelled. Something was chasing us! I ran as fast as I never ran before. It felt like I was flying. But I wasn't flying, it was the blue ghost who were flying.

Paul fell, I ran back to help him, but it was too late. The ghost had taken Paul! I went back to the cave. I was running in the dark, because Paul had the flashlight. I couldn't find him. I ran to the Police, but they didn't believe me, of course. I had to convince them that it was a ghost in that cave. But that wasn't easy.I called my mother, I thought maybe she would believe me, but I was wrong, very wrong. I had to sit and talk with mom in two hours before I convinced her that she at least should come down to the police department. One of the policemen believed me, his name was Carl, because he had seen the blue ghost to. So Carl managed to get three policemen, plus him self with me, down to the cave. The policemen had taken some flashlights so we could see well. It was many drawings on the walls around us, and there was a sign; it said. "Don't go further into this cave!" but we had to go further into the cave, because Paul were in there with the blue ghost, if not the ghost already had eaten Paul. No, I didn't want to think about that, I want to keep the hope up. We went further in. Everybody yelled "PAUL!"
"Son, I don't think his in here." said Carl
"But, he has to be in here, I saw it my self!"
"Come on boys let's go back. David, you come with us."
"No, not before we have found Paul!"
"Hey, Carl, I think the kid's not joking here." Said one of the policemen. Lets look all over for him, he might be injured, and need our help.
We went all the way to the bottom of the cave, and there he was. Paul was lying on the ground, and the blue ghost was sitting beside him. It looked as they were having a conversation. We went up to them, and discovered what they were doing. They where talking to one another. The blue ghost saw us and got scared. He looked at us and began to laugh.

We asked Paul what the ghost where laughing about, and Paul began to laugh to. Paul began to explained what had happened to him. The ghost had taken him to the bottom of the cave because he didn't have any friends. Now I understood why it was called the blue ghost. It was because it was blue, in the meaning lonely, not because of the colour. The ghost finely got more than one friend. He got me to. The policemen followed us up into the daylight and drove us home to our parents. They told us to keep away from the cave and its owner. I wonder who they where talking about. Could it be the blue ghost? Suddenly I realised that all of the policemen also believe in ghosts, they only had to see them first.

Paul and I went often to the cave and visited our new friend, but nobody did know. Sometimes the blue ghost came and visited us to, but that's another story.

If you want me to make more just say... i love to write :D

N I C K
10-26-2008, 01:36 PM
Wow, you reallyu had me going there thought you meant you saw one in person. Nice job though you should try more of these they are excellent.

Stealth
10-26-2008, 01:36 PM
Uhm.
You have a very imaginitive mind. Kudos for you.

aharper
10-26-2008, 01:38 PM
Nice story. Have a cookie. :)

muslimz
10-26-2008, 01:40 PM
thanks, I am always glad for a praise

Blub Klub
10-26-2008, 03:44 PM
Nice =) You kinda jacked off on your spelling and grammar,but interesting story overall =)