Hope

[Asian]

Hope
Does not fear.
Hope defys to thrive
Even in the darkest hour.
Hope comforts,
And secures
Promises, Vows, Assures.

[The Zaven]

I like this meaning you have in the lines. I'm glad your just not putting words together and making a mock of Shakespeare just to get Literary Artist.

[Asian]

I like this meaning you have in the lines. I'm glad your just not putting words together and making a mock of Shakespeare just to get Literary Artist.


It's actually for my english poem, we had to write a poem on a word we felt was strong, and meaningfull to us.

But, thanks.

[619hit]

nice!!!!!!!! really good.

[Asian]

Thank you 619

[K and O]

Dude, that may be short, but it has a lot of meaning.

Well done.

[Italy68]

Nice poem.

[Stealth]

Nice, I like it. Short and concise.

[PureSkiller]

Nice poem Asian. :)

<3

[Asian]

Thanks guys !

I got 29/30 on it, a couple convention errors.

[patronum]

Sounds girly lulul

[Asian]

That happens to be my gay brother.

[The Zaven]

That happens to be my gay brother.

I would just ignore him.

[David]

Nice on Asian.. I quite like it.

[Neosback]

very nice keep it up

[Asian]

Thanks for the feedback.

[dumamay100]

lil short but nice 10/10

[Asian]

lil short but nice 10/10


Yeah, it's just a short poem. It's all you'll see from me. (usually)

[patronum]

I would just ignore him.


Cnt ignor mee llulul

[Asian]

Cnt ignor mee llulul


My brother for ban, pls?

[liljon9090]

It is short but,Its Says alot(:

Nice poem:rolleyes:

[Asian]

It is short but,Its Says alot(:

Nice poem:rolleyes:


Thanks, keep the feedback coming :)

[patronum]

asians pooemms suakk !!LOlo12!