staker ex3
10-27-2008, 11:00 PM
hello all, im here to say im gunna be writing a story about a little girl names "caroline jones" the story should could out in the next day or so so keep an eye on this thread and yes their will be another part of the story about twice every week.
well... here it is thank you all for waiting and injoy part 1 and 2 of the story parts 3+ coming soon
Hi, my name is Caroline Jones.
Today I am going to tell you a little story about my past life.
It started when i visited my grandfather "John" while my parent's were away on a vacation
I was extremely mad when i found out that my parents where leaving me with my grandfather,
because he is way old and well i was 12 at the time and was scared of old people.Ok enough with my troubles im going to finish the story. On my way
visit my grandfather we had to stop to get gas, as we pulled up to the gas station I noticed a strange man in what looked to be a black robe with a hood
i thought to my self "That man must be crazy its over 100 degrees out side." but i soon forgot about that when my father asked "who wants ice cream"
so we all rushed into the gas station to get ice-cream. but what we found was no gas station it was disgusting with broken glass, bugs, and I think I even saw a mouse run across the floor. my father then said " this place is discussing lets just get gas and go" "but the station owner isn’t here" squealed my mother. "its alight we will just take the gas and go" my brother said. "fine" sighed my mother. as we went to the pump to put gas in our car I noticed what looked like a trail of blood coming from the pumps. but I thought it must have been some weird gas. When we finished pumping gas i looked at the hose it was stained red. I asked my dad "can you turn the pump on for just a second" "sure" my dad said. when he turned the pump on my heart sunk because it was not gas coming out of the pump it was blood "ahhhhh" I screamed and turned to run but hit something hard. It felt like a brick wall when i looked to se what it was I almost fainted because standing their was the man in the black robe but this time his hood was off . his head was bald with a signal tattoo on it that read "life" i turned to run from him but he grabbed me and pulled me into his dark robe. I passed out
End of part 1
Part 2
when I woke up I was in what looked to be and ally but the smell was different. it smelled like salt water. i tried to sit up but I learned that my feet were tied together. luckily their was a knife next to’ me I tried to cut through the ropes but as I was cutting the knife suddenly snapped and a chunk of meddle flew up and hit me in the cheek cutting a hole In my cheek. It didn’t hurt to bad but since the salt water was in the air it stung. I looked for something to stop the bleeding but found nothing. I decided to try and untie the robes. I spent about 2 hours trying to untie the ropes. Something flashed in just out of my vision I turned to see what it was but it was gone. When I turned back around their was a strange little man only around 5 feet tall just shorter than me he looked at me with a smile that was missing teeth. Wh-wh-who are you I asked. He replied in a crackly voice my name is sergoth I wonder around these parts looking for people that the dark thing brings here. Take this, it should help with the robes. The strange man tossed at me a sack full of ashes. How are these supposed to help? I asked just dust it onto the ropes don’t worry it will work. So I dusted the robe in the dust and something strange happened the robe seemed to burn off me. “thanks but what was that stuff?” I asked
“pixie dust” he replied “what!” I yelled ‘shh! Lower your voice he will here you” “who Is “he”? “he is the one who brought you here” the strange man tried to explain. But..but.. that cannot be true theirs no such think as pixies” I studderd. “ooh but their very real” groaned the man. “but how is that possible?” I asked. “well let me tell you the story.” “Over one million years ago a dark power was born his name was oirean he was born in a dark cavern in the middle of the forest. But no one know who his parents are. They say that his mother was killed giving birth to him and his father committed suicide to do his wife dieing. When the oirean was born he was cursed with dark powers. As he grew so did his powers. One day while practicing his powers he discovered the power of re-animation. He raise many dead and slowly but surly created a army of the un-dead. During his days he also discovers he had the power to create anything at will. So he decided to make a creature that look nice but was really a evil creature. While creating his army he ran into problems the creatures he was making that looked nice actually were nice so he banned them to the forest. They grew and grew and evolved until there were thousand of them. They built houses and created towns. Until their numbers grew to great to live in this single town. So they expanded while doing this they came across the cabin were oirean was born. They laughed and spit on it. It was a disgrace to all kind. These creatures spent hundreds of years expanding and hunting down the person who banished them to the forest. The creatures were now servile different species some more powerful than others. Finally these creatures found were oirean was hiding. They gathered all there warriors and fighters and stormed the cave were oirean was hiding. They fought for what seamed like years. Oirean’s powers have grown greatly almost to much for the creatures but after a long 3 and a half years oirean’s powers grew tired and he had no more strength the creatures stormed the cave killing oirean and burring him next to his army of un-dead.” The man was gasping for air as he finished the story. “that’s how the so called “imaginary” creatures were made.” “that’s amazing but how do I know I can believe you?” I asked as my brain tried to take in all that was just given to me. “the man that brought you here. That was oirean. He’s back and searching for the crystal of othrisst”
end of part 2
well... here it is thank you all for waiting and injoy part 1 and 2 of the story parts 3+ coming soon
Hi, my name is Caroline Jones.
Today I am going to tell you a little story about my past life.
It started when i visited my grandfather "John" while my parent's were away on a vacation
I was extremely mad when i found out that my parents where leaving me with my grandfather,
because he is way old and well i was 12 at the time and was scared of old people.Ok enough with my troubles im going to finish the story. On my way
visit my grandfather we had to stop to get gas, as we pulled up to the gas station I noticed a strange man in what looked to be a black robe with a hood
i thought to my self "That man must be crazy its over 100 degrees out side." but i soon forgot about that when my father asked "who wants ice cream"
so we all rushed into the gas station to get ice-cream. but what we found was no gas station it was disgusting with broken glass, bugs, and I think I even saw a mouse run across the floor. my father then said " this place is discussing lets just get gas and go" "but the station owner isn’t here" squealed my mother. "its alight we will just take the gas and go" my brother said. "fine" sighed my mother. as we went to the pump to put gas in our car I noticed what looked like a trail of blood coming from the pumps. but I thought it must have been some weird gas. When we finished pumping gas i looked at the hose it was stained red. I asked my dad "can you turn the pump on for just a second" "sure" my dad said. when he turned the pump on my heart sunk because it was not gas coming out of the pump it was blood "ahhhhh" I screamed and turned to run but hit something hard. It felt like a brick wall when i looked to se what it was I almost fainted because standing their was the man in the black robe but this time his hood was off . his head was bald with a signal tattoo on it that read "life" i turned to run from him but he grabbed me and pulled me into his dark robe. I passed out
End of part 1
Part 2
when I woke up I was in what looked to be and ally but the smell was different. it smelled like salt water. i tried to sit up but I learned that my feet were tied together. luckily their was a knife next to’ me I tried to cut through the ropes but as I was cutting the knife suddenly snapped and a chunk of meddle flew up and hit me in the cheek cutting a hole In my cheek. It didn’t hurt to bad but since the salt water was in the air it stung. I looked for something to stop the bleeding but found nothing. I decided to try and untie the robes. I spent about 2 hours trying to untie the ropes. Something flashed in just out of my vision I turned to see what it was but it was gone. When I turned back around their was a strange little man only around 5 feet tall just shorter than me he looked at me with a smile that was missing teeth. Wh-wh-who are you I asked. He replied in a crackly voice my name is sergoth I wonder around these parts looking for people that the dark thing brings here. Take this, it should help with the robes. The strange man tossed at me a sack full of ashes. How are these supposed to help? I asked just dust it onto the ropes don’t worry it will work. So I dusted the robe in the dust and something strange happened the robe seemed to burn off me. “thanks but what was that stuff?” I asked
“pixie dust” he replied “what!” I yelled ‘shh! Lower your voice he will here you” “who Is “he”? “he is the one who brought you here” the strange man tried to explain. But..but.. that cannot be true theirs no such think as pixies” I studderd. “ooh but their very real” groaned the man. “but how is that possible?” I asked. “well let me tell you the story.” “Over one million years ago a dark power was born his name was oirean he was born in a dark cavern in the middle of the forest. But no one know who his parents are. They say that his mother was killed giving birth to him and his father committed suicide to do his wife dieing. When the oirean was born he was cursed with dark powers. As he grew so did his powers. One day while practicing his powers he discovered the power of re-animation. He raise many dead and slowly but surly created a army of the un-dead. During his days he also discovers he had the power to create anything at will. So he decided to make a creature that look nice but was really a evil creature. While creating his army he ran into problems the creatures he was making that looked nice actually were nice so he banned them to the forest. They grew and grew and evolved until there were thousand of them. They built houses and created towns. Until their numbers grew to great to live in this single town. So they expanded while doing this they came across the cabin were oirean was born. They laughed and spit on it. It was a disgrace to all kind. These creatures spent hundreds of years expanding and hunting down the person who banished them to the forest. The creatures were now servile different species some more powerful than others. Finally these creatures found were oirean was hiding. They gathered all there warriors and fighters and stormed the cave were oirean was hiding. They fought for what seamed like years. Oirean’s powers have grown greatly almost to much for the creatures but after a long 3 and a half years oirean’s powers grew tired and he had no more strength the creatures stormed the cave killing oirean and burring him next to his army of un-dead.” The man was gasping for air as he finished the story. “that’s how the so called “imaginary” creatures were made.” “that’s amazing but how do I know I can believe you?” I asked as my brain tried to take in all that was just given to me. “the man that brought you here. That was oirean. He’s back and searching for the crystal of othrisst”
end of part 2