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shadow8564
10-28-2008, 08:51 PM
well here goes my 2nd poem :(


The man steps onto the road,
looking at the glistening sea before him,
he shall have no home now,
the man looks at the land one last time, then steps onto the boat.
He is free now, no one to hold him back,
he can now fill out his hopes and dreams.
Here he is, here he comes
welcome him, embrace him and respect him


ummm... well some of u may be familiar with my first poem "Death..." so yep just an attempt i guess. lol. :o

The Zaven
10-28-2008, 08:53 PM
How the hell is that a poem? It's barely two terrible statements you tried to glue together.

2/10