A Song I Wrote On A Dark Night

[Surfacing]

LAYING IN THE DARKNESS

What to do in this darkness
I feel no more
All alone by myself
I feel like im not wanted
And put back on the shelf.

Forgotten, Misplaced, Abused By You
So i lay here in the darkness
Holding my phone,Wait for that bite
About to take my life
While i lay here in the darkness.

How could this be?
Ive been replaced by a mvp
You people dont no how hard
This is for me!
I cant give in,I cant let go
Why is my life so bloody slow?
I guess its just me,This is how its
Ment to be,I fell like im drowning in the deep sea.

Forgotten, Misplaced, Abused By You
So i lay here in the darkness
Holding my phone,Wait for that bite
About to take my life
While i lay here in the darkness.

LAYING IN THE DARKNESS
GOODBYE

Rate Or Hate. :p

[Dangt351]

Pretty good poem :)
~Dangt351

[Stecki]

AWESOME!!!!!!! 10/10 great job man, keep this up and you should be a literary artist.

~stecki

[Surfacing]

lol thanx. i have another song typed on my computer. its about a cold day in hell. but i dont think it would be a good idea to post it as *young* kids might read :eek:

[Italy68]

It is nice

[PureSkiller]

Pretty nice. :)

Keep working. ^^

[shadow8564]

good :p

8/10 tho, nice poem

[Asian]

Sort of drifts from main idea to main idea. Can't find the true meaning in it.

6/10

[Teacher]

Great job, it flows and poem wrapped itself up pretty nicely, well done. :D

[Surfacing]

thanx alot guys

[The Zaven]

Misuse of capitals.

I Lol'd@ the fact that you abbreviated on Literature.

4/10

[619hit]

nice poem!