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Asian
10-29-2008, 04:40 PM
Mistakes.
Something that we all make,
Some small, some large.

Mistakes shouldn't make us who we are,
The mistakes i make are mine,
without noone to blame.

I'll accept i made them, and move on.
I can only ask you to look deep in your heart,
and see it's not you, or me, but we.

When it started it was great,
Then we made our mistakes.
We started trying to change eachother.

Now, who we are around,
changes us as a whole.
Before, we were made..
Before, they came.
Before, i was too blame.
Before, you brought me to shame.
Before, you played me like a game.

I know we'll be together again,
it's only time.
Until then, just keep me in mind.
PureSkiller
10-29-2008, 04:45 PM
Was this made for some girl? :)

It's really nice Asian, I love to read your poems. ;]7

<3
Archemedies
10-29-2008, 05:14 PM
Well...I'll be honest, you made quite a few mistakes when you were typing this. It also isnt your best work. It is decent, but it wasnt something that I found interesting.

6/10
The Zaven
10-29-2008, 05:34 PM
I agree with Temperance, you did make mistakes. Although it looks like you just put alot of sentences together to call it a story, which is the same thing as a poem, but it's sounded out into meaning.

5/10
Asian
10-29-2008, 06:03 PM
Hmm, i guess everyone has some blunders.

Thanks for the feedback.
patronum
10-29-2008, 08:46 PM
asians pooemms suakk !!LOlo12!
Asian
10-29-2008, 09:31 PM
asians pooemms suakk !!LOlo12!


Ban my brother...

pls?
619hit
10-30-2008, 12:09 AM
nice poem!
Boylight
10-30-2008, 04:35 AM
Little bit outtuned.Start was good.
5/10.
Italy68
10-30-2008, 04:36 AM
Nice poem Asian
Stealth
10-30-2008, 04:49 AM
I liked it..

7/10
Asian
10-30-2008, 05:21 PM
I liked it..

7/10


Thanks stealthy
Peehat
10-31-2008, 05:03 PM
http://forum.travian.us/showthread.php?t=40995

ok?
Jesse
10-31-2008, 08:30 PM
http://forum.travian.us/showthread.php?t=40995

ok?


Stop attempting to frame people you faggot.

Asian's post: 10-29-2008, 04:40 PM
Forum.travian.us post: 10-30-2008, 10:43 PM

Perm banned.
123skilla123
10-31-2008, 08:41 PM
well i made a mistake, im sorry, i thought he was ripping, you cant ban for making mistakes
Jesse
10-31-2008, 09:02 PM
well i made a mistake, im sorry, i thought he was ripping, you cant ban for making mistakes
I can, will, and did.

You did it on purpose.
Neosback
10-31-2008, 09:16 PM
You are a mistake! jk very nice 10/10 lol at that guy who fails at trying to make it look like you ripped
123skilla123
10-31-2008, 09:34 PM
Benz....the biggest twat faced punk faggot on dodian..doesn't deserve mod if he bans people for making mistake

benz...2 words...

YOU FAG!
Neosback
10-31-2008, 09:37 PM
two words...ip banned

ok now that I got thos two words out may retarded you are
Asian
10-31-2008, 10:09 PM
I can, will, and did.

You did it on purpose.


Owned.

Thanks, Benz.
13lack Gore
10-31-2008, 10:47 PM
I like it :)
Asian
11-01-2008, 10:53 AM
I like it :)


Thanks, and my poem is still on their damn forums.
Pimicihidifi
11-01-2008, 12:05 PM
the first few stanzas werent made by you. they were mad eby Princess Kaileena in The Prince of Persia: The Two Thrones.

you have no proof who the original author was (I don't see a copyright), and given that the first two stanzas are also plagarized, you throw a fit?

I said all ii needed to, now whatever.
Asian
11-01-2008, 12:23 PM
the first few stanzas werent made by you. they were mad eby Princess Kaileena in The Prince of Persia: The Two Thrones.

you have no proof who the original author was (I don't see a copyright), and given that the first two stanzas are also plagarized, you throw a fit?

I said all ii needed to, now whatever.


Those stanzas are so commonly heard that noone has copyright to them. I've heard them throughout my whole life.