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Angel
10-30-2008, 02:50 PM
This is Gold, a short story I wrote for English. I'm currently working on lengthening it and revising it, so that the ending isn't so cut off and hurried.

I put it into pastebin, as it has no length limits. If it's too hard to read, you could always copy and paste it into word.

http://arya.pastebin.com/f3088655a

I hope you like it. I highlighted the parts that I'm going to add into.

- Angel

liljon9090
10-30-2008, 03:20 PM
Wow,Put alot of work into it,Im nearly half way done reading.So far 8/10 (::rolleyes: