Soldat

[Archemedies]

Little girl, what is the matter?
Why do you cry?
I see the yellow star on your sleeve.
And now I know why.

You watched your Father go away.
Your Mother, raped and used.
How much should a child see
Of their faith being abused?

Please do not cry little girl,
I don't want to scare you.
I can't help being a Nazi,
And yourself being a Jew.

I hope the Lord above
Will forgive me for what I do
If you don't stop crying little girl,
I will have to shoot you.

I do not sleep much anymore,
Even when in my own bed.
I just can't believe the things I do:
I shot a four year old in the head.

[619hit]

nice peom!

[K E W L]

Lol I like D rap3 lin3.

[Boylight]

Its not my favourite.

3/10.

[Jesse]

Lol I like D rap3 lin3.

If you're posting in my section, it's going to be maturely.

7/10 for the rhyming scheme
8/10 for the poem.

7.5/10

[Dangt351]

Great Poem dude!

~Dangt351

[Archemedies]

If you're posting in my section, it's going to be maturely.

7/10 for the rhyming scheme
8/10 for the poem.

7.5/10

Anything from you over a 5 is excellent in my opinion.

Thanks Benz. :D

[Asian]

I like how it flowed well.

8/10 overall.
Keep it up.

[Stecki]

i like the way it is so true, 10/10 from me

~stecki

[The Zaven]

I agree, rhyming sucks.

4/10

[ratmaster90]

Pretty good.
Soldat is the name of a shooting game XD


-Rat