Best Friends

[Jarodx4]

Our friendship means more to me than anything,
I hope our friendship will last and last forever.

You are the one that I can trust,
even tell you my deepest darkest secrets.

You are amazing,
If we never met our life's wouldn't be as good as they are now.

Every night I thank God for giving me to you,
we were meant to be,
Through thick and thin we always stick together.

I think our friendship is one of a kind,
Theres no start,nor end.
No one can compare their friendship to ours,
Ours is too deep,too deep to even think about leaving.

Our friendship grows and grows,
only stopping to rest.

No fights,No arguments,
we have the same brains,agreeing with all our thoughts.

Sometimes your eyes start to water,
I'm always there to wipe them away from our friendship.

We loose our strength,
but we share our friendship to make us stronger.

Jealous or not,
people try to break our friendship,
but that can only make us stronger.

We are a treasure,
always building our pleasure.

You may be better,
but we always want to exchange our lives,
Your always in my heart,
never to be broken,
our friendship lasts forever!

[Dangt351]

This is a great poem!
Good Job.

~Dangt351

[Jarodx4]

Thanks,thats why ive been inactive for a while,coz ive been brainstorming in my pad about this poem

[Stecki]

that's awesome man 10/10, hope to see more from you. i think you deserve literary artist.

~stecki

[Jarodx4]

Yeah,Thanks for 10/10 but i would like litarey artist but I dont think that would happen,I have some more poems in my pas i might type in and show yous soon.

[Boylight]

If u continue to make these ur artist soon.Great work.

9/10.

[Hugh Hefner]

Wheeeeeels x5,
Nice man,
Keep up tha good work.
Your words are true.

[Jarodx4]

''My heart does all my writing''

[takodar619]

I like it.

[Jarodx4]

Thanks GUYS ,,
Everyone post what they think please.

[The Zaven]

Once again your vocabulary isn't large.

7/10

[Max]

Very Nice..

[Archemedies]

For one, you used the word Friendship much more than necessary (8 times), and it wasn't really anything appealing. It just seemed like a poem anyone could, and can write. Try to write about something that is deep, and comes from within, something you haven't written about before

4/10

[Soulblast9]

its GREAT AND LONG =] good job jarodex

[Jarodx4]

For one, you used the word Friendship much more than necessary (8 times), and it wasn't really anything appealing. It just seemed like a poem anyone could, and can write. Try to write about something that is deep, and comes from within, something you haven't written about before

4/10

Im working on one now.

[Italy68]

Nice poem

[Jarodx4]

thanks bloody.