War

[Slyith]

War

Every time I see you,
we always get into a fight.
We fight for who is right and wrong,
yet the pain and suffering we cause,
are only hurting ourselves.

Every time I see you,
the whole world turns upside down.
The world is burning with the ash of fire,
as if it had been living in hell.

Every time I see you,
I ask you, why do we fight.
For what cause should we fight for.
To gain power and money.






It's okay so far i guess..

[X Blake X]

Nice Poem Man.

-Ibrairiff

[Jahsucks]

Tell you the truth,I didn't like it that much but,It's pretty good 7/10

[Slyith]

yeah i didn't like it much...but this poem resembles how people fight over stupid things

[Seno]

It was pretty good actually. If you chose your words a little differently, it could have been better.
I think this song goes with your Poem pretty well though, I was listening to it when I read your poem.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9KW8DRSvEoQ

[Venom]

Beautiful Poem Enough Said. :)

[Silver 0ne]

War

Every time I see you,
we always get into a fight.
We fight for who is right and wrong,
yet the pain and suffering we cause,
are only hurting ourselves.

Every time I see you,
the whole world turns upside down.
The world is burning with the ash of fire,
as if it had been living in hell.

Every time I see you,
I ask you, why do we fight.
For what cause should we fight for.
To gain power and money.

(c) Great Lakes4


Add on:

Every time I see you,
I get this urge to fight.
My fist curl up and I cant stop it.
I finally know why we fight.
We fight for Pride, Self-Respect, and Love from a Special Girl.

Pm how u like it!...

[Slyith]

pretty nice :P. I'll edit it though.

I'ma try and finish this one and make a new poem..I've been busy with School so i haven't made poems lately