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wowowowee
11-18-2008, 07:22 AM
It has been 2 years since i have spoken to you
It has been 2 years since i have seen you
It has ben 2 years since i have heard from you
It has been 2 years i wish i had of new
It has been 2 years of lost time
It has been 2 years that i wish i could of said good bye
This year you have died
Now i say goodbye

firezone99
11-18-2008, 07:28 AM
wow...this one is not bad rhymes alot and quite touching but put it in center it will look great=] i rate u 10/10 for it=]good job for a beginner.

Baird90210
11-18-2008, 07:59 AM
9/10, its pretty good.

wowowowee
11-18-2008, 08:05 AM
9/10, its pretty good.

If you liked that one i think you mite like this one

You are the one

Part 1

you are the one for me
you have blue eyes
you have brown, wavy hair
you have the voice of the ocian
you have words like Romeo
you have my heart


Part 2

you have had my heart for years
you have my heart for years to come
you have my trust
you have my soul
you have my virginity