Changing

[Webber]

I knew it was going to happen
Day by day
It just gradually changed
Just to see myself sway and sway.

Why, oh why, did she have to change
Change in 100 different ways
Standing with new people, flirting with new people
Just never saying that phrase

'I love you i do'
Is what she used to say
But now, 1 week later, she just ignores me
And could only express 1 word today

Love. Love. Love.
The thing which can change the most
It happened to her, in the space of a week
Just feel like a lonely ghost

Why did she change i wanted to know
But no one would tell me the truth
I just wanted to know, to see, to wonder
Why she became so stupid at youth

Oh dear L, oh dear.
You just had to mess it up
I did all i could to help you alot
But you almost fell into the death cup

You changed, you changed.
It hurt me inside
I just need to know if you're safe, dear
So then our hearts won't collide

I miss you so much, my dearest angel
Every day of the week
I yearn for you, darling
Because without you i am just too darn weak

The other girls are right i suppose
But none can beat that special one
But now she has changed, i cannot win
I have just been outdone

Help me everyone, i need her back
To change her new twisted look
I cannot do it alone, i have to admit
Because her, Lucy, my heart she took

I have no faith, but i have to live on
But how can i when she is gone
I cry and cry and just cannot stop
Thinking of the changes she had undergone

Again and again i think
Why on earth would she betray me?
We were perfect, match maded in heaven
I guess i just couldn't agree

A beatiful house in Venice
Was our only scheme
It was amazing until, she changed that day
And all that was one f*cked up dream

So here i am, saying it to you L
That i just need you back
So come back to me, and unchange yourself
And there will be only one track

A track to happyness is that we on
A new beginning is upon us
So lets sit back, and enjoy our love
Sitting in your white golden dress

We're walking down the isle
Tears in our eyes and happyness sweeping over me
Will this be the change which i always wanted?
And spend the honeymoon by the sea.

I'm not sure if i'm gonna add to it or not. Gonna see what you think.
Mkay, it seems good actually, can a gmod or w/e move to submissions.

[13lack Gore]

Dodians very own Shakespear.

Dude, your poems have alot of meaning. And they are very touching.

[aharper]

Dodians very own Shakespear.

Dude, your poems have alot of meaning. And they are very touching.

Agreed, dude you must be deeply in love with this girl of yours. Great poem. 10/10.

Aharper.

[Marisa]

You have a lot of feelings in it, which is good. Some of the phrases are a little hard to understand though. (You knew I was going to pick on this but...) spelling and grammar errors. (It's really something you've got to pay attention to if you want Lit Artist.) I think I almost like this better than your WWII poem, but not quite. 8/10. Keep working. :)

[Vishaan]

You have a lot of feelings in it, which is good. Some of the phrases are a little hard to understand though. (You knew I was going to pick on this but...) spelling and grammar errors. (It's really something you've got to pay attention to if you want Lit Artist.) I think I almost like this better than your WWII poem, but not quite. 8/10. Keep working. :)

Marisa is my spell checker.

I liked it, a couple of phrases didnt flow too well, but the emotion in it kind of makes up for that. It was really long and worth reading though. 8/10

[Kyle]

Wow, I really like this one. Nice job.
~kyle

[Boylight]

Good job.Next artist for sure.
I hope good from you.