Fuel

[Vishaan]

WARNING:
I cuss a little in this so, just don't freak out on me.

This is a song for my death metal band. I wrote it like 3 days ago.

You fueled the fire,
The fires of hell.
And now the gates are unleashed.

Ive reigned upon,
This sovreign town.
As the depths of hell are breached.

Fuel!!
Thats how it burns..
Fuel!!
Is how I churn..
Fuell!!
Is what he drinks when he..
BREAKS!!

The fires destroy,
They burn it down.
As the gates of heaven are reached.

It slowly dies,
And falls away.
NOW ITS TIME TO EAT!

Fuel!!
Thats how it burns..
Fuel!!
Is how I churn..
Fuell!!
Is what he drinks when he..
BREAKS!!

I crush it down!
We smash it out!
We stamp it into the ground!

We burn it off!
Detatch your faith!
And steal you ****ING SOUL!!!

Fuel!!
Thats how it burns..
Fuel!!
Is how I churn..
Fuell!!
Is what he drinks when he..
BREAKS!!

[aharper]

Great poem 8/10. Keep up the good work.

Aharper.

[Thanksgiving]

Nice song.
I could see a hardcore death metal band singing that :)
Great job !

[playstation3]

Nice. 9/10

Like thanksgiving said, this would be a good song for a Death Metal Band.

I just imagined it in song form with heavy metal guitars in the background and it sounds amazing.

[Kyle]

Ooo, I like it =] Lol I've been trying to make a band forever, but my friends can't play their instruments at all =\ lol.
Nice song though =]
~Kyle

[Thankzgiving]

Good poem. :D nice job..

7/10. thankzgiving. :D

[Vishaan]

Great poem 8/10. Keep up the good work.

Aharper.
Thanks [=
Nice song.
I could see a hardcore death metal band singing that :)
Great job !
Hehe we did, I just got back from a small show at my friends party.
Nice. 9/10

Like thanksgiving said, this would be a good song for a Death Metal Band.

I just imagined it in song form with heavy metal guitars in the background and it sounds amazing.
Thanks! If I ever figure out how to record myself, Ill make some clips of me playing guitar.
Ooo, I like it =] Lol I've been trying to make a band forever, but my friends can't play their instruments at all =\ lol.
Nice song though =]
~Kyle
[= Thats what happened with me, but I ended up teaching half the guitarists in my town how to play. 9 years baby!

[Jesse]

-8/10.

No deathmetal plz

[Harold]

you ****ing, Don't you mean your?