Ashes
01-17-2009, 11:43 PM
"Boom!" one day I wake up to find bombs flying horrendously around me! I courageously try to see if my family is calm and well, But they weren't my mother had suffered a shot gun wound to her chest!
I started to get anxious. I was scared, I was shivering cold, No one to help me, Nothing to do, Just anxious completely anxious. I thought this was the end, I was horrified by the fact that I could be shot down at any time!
The next hour went by and I was still shivering on my way to the fridge I saw a truck from the distance, It looked loaded with men with guns and some type of steel Armour. I took a closer look, then "Bang! Bang! Bang!" shots are fired straight into my room. As I closed the fridge I ran to the closet and hid, I had thoughts of the men coming in and killing me. I was as quiet as a mouse, But I was forgetting something. My mother! she was alone screaming horrendously on her bed. The men came in and took her I could her her scream my name "Thomas!!! Thomas!!! hide hide!! there here!! the warfare's killers!"
I started to feel the need to go and get her but it was just to late. I would just be killed straight away. I was thinking anxiously when my brother and father would get home, They were traveling to the super-market earlier and it was just my mother and I. I knew I needed to call them but I couldn't leave the closet, The men were getting closer and that made me shiver all over more and more. When I heard then pass me I took the knife I had shoved in my pocket whenever I go to sleep. I ran out and stabbed the Warfare Killer! I quickly took his rifle and went searching for mum. I had seen her waiting out side but there was no truck there anymore! They had left!
Then my dad and brother arrived and I explained to them what had happened. David my brother didn't believe me but luckily Andrew my dad did! It was a life-saver that someone would be there to help. I knew the men would be back after they heard I had killed one of there's, I did the wrong thing! The men were back, with 5 men with rifles. David, Andrew and I had no chance so we quickly got some knifes and hid in the closet, As before When I killed the other Warfare Killer whenever they went pass we stabbed, In the end we killed 4. But the problem was that he only had 4 Knifes! There was 1 man left to kill but we couldn't, We had to wait it out. David was very anxious to kill the other man but you could see in his blue dark watery eyes that he was scared. I don't tease but I feel the need! I go outside and see the man. He says some things, But it was all gibberish to me, Until I heard him say, "I will kill you!! And your whole family!!"
He shot his rifle at me and missed I quickly got back in the closet and told the others to stay back, I went out with the other knife I took out the man's back and threw it at the man, I got him in the chest and he fell to his death.
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That is all I am up to in this point of time, I hope to finish this later on this week. Tips will be muchly appreciated and listened to.
I started to get anxious. I was scared, I was shivering cold, No one to help me, Nothing to do, Just anxious completely anxious. I thought this was the end, I was horrified by the fact that I could be shot down at any time!
The next hour went by and I was still shivering on my way to the fridge I saw a truck from the distance, It looked loaded with men with guns and some type of steel Armour. I took a closer look, then "Bang! Bang! Bang!" shots are fired straight into my room. As I closed the fridge I ran to the closet and hid, I had thoughts of the men coming in and killing me. I was as quiet as a mouse, But I was forgetting something. My mother! she was alone screaming horrendously on her bed. The men came in and took her I could her her scream my name "Thomas!!! Thomas!!! hide hide!! there here!! the warfare's killers!"
I started to feel the need to go and get her but it was just to late. I would just be killed straight away. I was thinking anxiously when my brother and father would get home, They were traveling to the super-market earlier and it was just my mother and I. I knew I needed to call them but I couldn't leave the closet, The men were getting closer and that made me shiver all over more and more. When I heard then pass me I took the knife I had shoved in my pocket whenever I go to sleep. I ran out and stabbed the Warfare Killer! I quickly took his rifle and went searching for mum. I had seen her waiting out side but there was no truck there anymore! They had left!
Then my dad and brother arrived and I explained to them what had happened. David my brother didn't believe me but luckily Andrew my dad did! It was a life-saver that someone would be there to help. I knew the men would be back after they heard I had killed one of there's, I did the wrong thing! The men were back, with 5 men with rifles. David, Andrew and I had no chance so we quickly got some knifes and hid in the closet, As before When I killed the other Warfare Killer whenever they went pass we stabbed, In the end we killed 4. But the problem was that he only had 4 Knifes! There was 1 man left to kill but we couldn't, We had to wait it out. David was very anxious to kill the other man but you could see in his blue dark watery eyes that he was scared. I don't tease but I feel the need! I go outside and see the man. He says some things, But it was all gibberish to me, Until I heard him say, "I will kill you!! And your whole family!!"
He shot his rifle at me and missed I quickly got back in the closet and told the others to stay back, I went out with the other knife I took out the man's back and threw it at the man, I got him in the chest and he fell to his death.
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That is all I am up to in this point of time, I hope to finish this later on this week. Tips will be muchly appreciated and listened to.