Autumn

[Colin]

Autumn

Feathery and like lotion,
the pillows in the sky.
The whispy motion,
The glisten from up high.

The golden leaves reflecting,
autumn trees in the daybreak.
Fresh puddles show a glittering,
sparkles stun the morning lake.

Flowers showing the growth,
the animals begining to flock.
The glasslike dew I can loath,
my new life is starting to unlock.

[TOXiiCz]

nice masuraki, maybe literary is for you, your work is great...

[Colin]

nice masuraki, maybe literary is for you, forum mod was too much of a responsability...

I would be fine with Literary, thanks.

The responsibility I could handle, it was just that one word that was not within my vocabulary.

[Kyle]

Dude, that was way uncalled for. Masuraki just made a tiny mistake. Otherwise, great poem. I like it :)
-Kyle

[Tupac777]

Nice masuraki 9/10 keep doing good you will achieve greatness

Peace, king cold20

[Colin]

Dude, that was way uncalled for. Masuraki just made a tiny mistake. Otherwise, great poem. I like it :)
-Kyle

Thank you for the backup :)

Nice masuraki 9/10 keep doing good you will achieve greatness

Peace, king cold20

King Cold2 you mean?

[Tupac777]

Hey I'm sticking up for masuraki
Hey toxics stfu and that was uncalled for I'll report you to nottz the next time you do it again

Peace, king cold2
I'll be. Back tomatrow at 3:00pm

[TOXiiCz]

it was a blooming compliment i said he deserves literary arts, meaning hsi poems are great fgs.

[Colin]

it was a blooming compliment i said he deserves literary arts, meaning hsi poems are great fgs.

I will thank you for that, please refrain from bringing up what I got demodded for in future ok?

[TOXiiCz]

kk u want me to edit or not sorry for that...

[Colin]

kk u want me to edit or not sorry for that...

I would appreciate an edit, thank you.

[KOAH]

very good nice use of seasonal symbolism

[Tupac777]

Hey guys let's report toxic for callingus fags????

Jk toxic

I'm sorry you hate me I don't know why tho?

Peace,king cold2

[Colin]

very good nice use of seasonal symbolism

Appreciated, thank you :)

[SeaJae]

Hey guys let's report toxic for callingus fags????

Jk toxic

I'm sorry you hate me I don't know why tho?

Peace,king cold2

These posts are one of many reasons King Cold2 was and deserved to be banned.


Very nice poem Masuraki, I like it. 10/10 from me.

[Tupac777]

Hey cj I posted that
Cuz I'mad
U prob do the same thing

And I'll brb 2 marrow
King cold2

[RockOnDude]

8/10 best yet. Although the last line doesn't seem to go with the poem. But overall good job.

[Colin]

8/10 best yet. Although the last line doesn't seem to go with the poem. But overall good job.

Thank you.