Rain of Sorrow

[Colin]

Rain of Sorrow

Wind and rain,
thunder in the sky.
The patter of the window pane,
drops of joy from up high.

Small silver crystalized spheres,
above the gloomy clouds lie.
As moving as children tears,
thunder and lightning engulf the sky.

Those drops of sorrow,
more unlucky than three seven's.
From an orchestral of joy it can not borrow,
They are the symphony within the heavens.

[RockOnDude]

Ooooo 9/10
Very nice.
Now slow down.
If i see another one before 30 minutes I am going to be ashamed of you.

[Colin]

Ooooo 9/10
Very nice.
Now slow down.
If i see another one before 30 minutes I am going to be ashamed of you.

This took me 30 minutes, the other ones I posted were the ones I wrote last night. Thank you :)

[SeaJae]

Hmm, in the poetic mood this evening, eh? =)

[Colin]

Hmm, in the poetic mood this evening, eh? =)

Actually, yes!

[Tupac777]

Good job 10/10 do you smoke weed your high on poems woof keep doing good!!!

King cold2

[Colin]

Good job 10/10 do you smoke weed your high on poems woof keep doing good!!!

King cold2

No, I do not smoke weed, lol.

[Tupac777]

LOL I'll put it this way 100/10

[Colin]

LOL I'll put it this way 100/10

I am guessing you like?

[TOXiiCz]

i always try not to make my poems rhyme as when you rhyme them they sometimes lose their heart and meaning but you still carry on amazing me...
10/10

[Colin]

Thank you :)

[bluedragon]

I really like how you ended it 'They are the symphony within the heavens'.

Great job, 10/10.

[Zaveski]

The ending isn't too swell.

[F2ks]

It's a great poem, you have a good use of vocabulary and good meaning to your poems. 8/10