Sunset by Day

[Colin]

Sunset by Day

The rays futhur intensify,
temperatures begin to soar.
The sun may shine eternally,
full of mystical lore.

Paradise lies beyond,
alone in the sand.
Your eyes begin to speculate,
the light is beheld by your very hand.

Her golden hair gleams,
the sunset fades away.
Her eyes begin to sparkle,
tomorrow's paradise is just another day.

[Godwielder41]

Wtf is with you and poems?!?! You must really want the Literary Artist bad, don't you? Well I must say here is another wonderful piece of art. =)

[liljon9090]

Another great poem by Masuraki,Keep up the great work.

[D1sturb3d]

Nice work. Im guessing you want to be a Literary Artist.

[Tupac777]

This is great 10/10

[Zaveski]

I'd have to say, I've probably never used the word Intensify in my life.

Probably the best I've seen in days.

[TOXiiCz]

sorry to ask...how old are you, beacause you poems are great.

[Colin]

This is great 10/10

Thank you, I do try.

Nice work. Im guessing you want to be a Literary Artist.

So it may seem.

I'd have to say, I've probably never used the word Intensify in my life.

Probably the best I've seen in days.

I will take that as a complement.

sorry to ask...how old are you, beacause you poems are great.

I am 17 years old.

[bluedragon]

Very nice work masuraki, another 10/10 for you.