Birds of Paradise

[SeaJae]

*Name taken off of a Magic:The Gathering card. Ironic, eh?*

Bird of Paradise

Floating abroad currents of existence
Glistening with its head held high
Savaging an abandoned area to settle
Bird of Paradise - A strange and mysterious creature

Paradise is home, but recreated to suit you
Engulfing you to live in an environment that persists to keep you in.
Strangely enough, Paradise is not easily found.
The Birds of Paradise work in mysterious ways.

Whilst dormiting, paradise moves farther away
To find Paradise, one must define paradise itself.
Paradise is only an arm extension away
The Birds of Paradise glide proudly over the wise shores.


-Cjclement1.

[F2ks]

Some lines I couldn't really grasp, Besides that it's pretty good. I liked how you used the bigger words, seems to me like your improving. 8/10

Edit: You spelt, Environment incorrectly.

[SeaJae]

Some lines I couldn't really grasp, Besides that it's pretty good. I liked how you used the bigger words, seems to me like your improving. 8/10

Edit: You spelt, Environment incorrectly.

Bleh, I'll fix that. Thank you.