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I vengance I
01-28-2009, 03:51 PM
Lol, i was bored one day and wrote a rhyme about dodian.

see the people in rs who don't succeed
they find rs servers to compete
they stumble across dodian
and there eyes do bleed

so they register
yes sir it's the bomb
but 4.0 you start of with none
so they folow around
untill they figure the "run"

They killin' for cash but theres not enough
so they start being nubs an begging for sum
they find it kind of strange that they aint getting change
so they start being corrupt and getting outraged
they postin forums be hatin like "Th1s B3 Sh1t p4ge"
ntil an infraction is given for doublin' the page.

And they make a new account after bein salude
and they search google for dodian dupes
little did we now 400m will astonish me
1 day later he ruined the econamy
danno apears and threatens with ban
but he replies with that dont worry me
il just type in google download free proxy.

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Yes it's a little stupid but its quite funny....
Rate or Hate.

LYRiiCs
01-28-2009, 03:54 PM
Your spelling's not that good, and the structure of the verses are not that well put together. In a way it's good, because you've been imaginative.

I vengance I
01-28-2009, 04:08 PM
The spelling isn't meant to be perfect, its a creative..
hence the use of slang and short's e.g "n" for and.

Marisa
01-28-2009, 04:39 PM
The spelling isn't meant to be perfect, its a creative..
hence the use of slang and short's e.g "n" for and.

He still has a point. There are some things in there that are incorrectly spelled and it's not affecting the way the word is said. Also it's "their" not "there."

I vengance I
01-28-2009, 04:40 PM
Thanks, this was only a bit of fun while i was bored.

K and O
01-29-2009, 10:54 AM
It's alright. Guess you were pretty bored when you made it.

Robin h0od
01-29-2009, 11:02 AM
yes sir.. yes i was.
lol