Beneath My Bed!

[TOXiiCz]

I wrote this earlier on today, it is not yet finished and credit to LYRiiCz for the first line.

I heard under my bed an almighty roar,
I jumped out the covers and ran to the door.

I opened the door and a man stood and said,
"something is lurking under your bed!"

I ran upstairs, only to find,
something was coming at me from behind.

I spun around and took a dive,
Slicing through the air like butter with a knife.

[LYRiiCs]

Yeah, credit me :)
At school today we had to make a poem in English, and we were getting bored, so we just ignored it and started making weird poems about monsters, lol.

[K 0 3 D]

Hahaha pretty funny, 8/10 :D

[Marisa]

This sounds like a children's book or something. I like it though. Definitely made me giggle a little bit. Keep working on it, I can't wait to see the finished product.

[TOXiiCz]

HAHA i cant wait to see it finished either.

[Zaveski]

You ended the intro and skipped towards a "No-ending". You aren't good at this at all.


It isn't a poem tbh.

[Stecki]

You ended the intro and skipped towards a "No-ending". You aren't good at this at all.

and you didnt read it all lol, he said its NOT finished.

~stecki

[rader alex]

That'd be good for a Stephen King poem.

[Zaveski]

and you didnt read it all lol, he said its NOT finished.

~stecki

I'm still saying, George Bush could of thought of that in 5 seconds.

[K and O]

I'm still saying, George Bush could of thought of that in 5 seconds.

Yup, you're right.

[Boylight]

Dont end this poem with lame lines.
Its good.

[TOXiiCz]

Jeez man, people don't read, 1. It is in work in progress,
and 2. I state that it is not finished

[TOXiiCz]

Thanks Moc.

[Boylight]

Jeez man, people don't read, 1. It is in work in progress,
and 2. I state that it is not finished

I know it is.Just dont end with lame lines.