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Zaveski
02-07-2009, 06:54 PM
Sing a tune,
Watch til noon
What will we do with this paramour?

Ring a bell
See it sell away to ourselves
What can we see with this paramour?

I'll speak it clear
While no one is near,
But nothing can seperate our thoughts

Nothing seems right,
Willing to give up the fight
That's what this world is made of

Pretend to be a hero
Rushing down to zero
Not a chance, not a hope
Trying to improve

A twist it is
A turn it shall
Wake up to the other song

We can't change
What we have caused
We can't see the world of ours view itself

In this together
Nothing stops forever
Believe in the sign
Walk down the line, when nothing seems to change

Listen to the beat,
On an open seat
We cannot change the fate that binds us

On an open road,
We came here to see what has rowed
No one will speak of it later than caused

These words won't change
They're tipping down the hour
Watch it go to a range
Yet all it could of been was sour

Gleaming and shattered
I ask what's the matter
But all we can think of is this paramour

LYRiiCs
02-07-2009, 07:00 PM
Very long, and very effective.
This is definitley one of your stronger pieces of work.
9/10.

LiamSupreme
02-07-2009, 07:23 PM
:o stuning piece of work

10/10 bravo.