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KxWarrior
02-19-2009, 02:16 PM
A chilling breath
and everything is gone
To know you were my murderer
all along

I would've let this stop
if i knew the price
I look deep into your eyes
and take one last look to suffice

I lay as my heart slows down
It beats weakly against the ground
my eyes grow grey and i slowly die
and a tear goes down my bloodshot eye

To think our love was just a toy
to break the heart of this young boy
My love for you has surely grown
And I thank you for now you have known.

You were the light of my life
now you've dimmed me
To think you could be my wife
was a mistake to be.

Wrote it out of anger and frustration. It is not directed to anyone that I know at all. lol...Just wanted to write something to feel better.

Colin
02-19-2009, 02:23 PM
10/10 - This poem is truely amazing KxWarrior, outstanding work.

KxWarrior
02-19-2009, 02:24 PM
Thanks, i wrote it in 3 minutes, i SHI* you not.

Kinda just wanted to write something to get some frustration out of my veins. :\

Skilzgod
02-19-2009, 03:13 PM
and again a poem, i like it :)

Venom
02-19-2009, 03:15 PM
That is wayyy better than anything I could ever make. Good job. 10/10.

KxWarrior
02-19-2009, 04:22 PM
thanks skilz :P you're an awesome mod

and flare, same to you for the thanks Lol.

G D Pride
02-24-2009, 03:31 PM
10/10

great poem, great wording to.