Only you.

[Asian]

If you could choose one word, to describe me.
What would it be? Choose it carefully.
If i sang in your sleep, would you recognize my voice?
Like a choice, to be with or without me.


Only me 'n you has how its been.
Only you again, and again.
Only you 'n me and only how it's supposed to be.
Only you ring in my ears, Only you sing that i hear.
Only you know me, and only I know that there's only you.

Yeah, feeling like this again. I didn't get feedback last time because i put this in my gallery, and not a single post.

[619hit]

nice poem man!

[boo hoo plz]

wow, i think i might have to rip your poem :rolleyes:
nah, but one nice poem!

[Boylight]

If you could choose one word, to describe me.
What would it be? Choose it carefully.
If i sang in your sleep, would you recognize my voice?
Like a choice, to be with or without me.


Only me 'n you has how its been.
Only you again, and again.
Only you 'n me and only how it's supposed to be.
Only you ring in my ears, Only you sing that i hear.
Only you know me, and only I know that there's only you.

Yeah, feeling like this again. I didn't get feedback last time because i put this in my gallery, and not a single post.




What is it with those red lines.
It doesent seem to flow.
Great beginning.

[Hurostu]

Very nice work of literacy art. I'm amazed at your skill. Please, make more.

[Colin]

9/10 - Great work Asian.

[Ff7Cloud0 99]

Baby you take my virginity away.

10/10