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XX aelita XX
02-23-2009, 05:11 AM
Hello, This is a 3 in 1 Poem

My first poem i call, A new day ahead.

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The sun is shining...
Lights all over my heart...
Always more to come...
New challenges to face...
A never escaping brightness..
Only a day away..
a new day..
New.
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My second poem, I call Deep into my life.

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A tear from my eye
a drop down from heaven.
Angels over my head...
Fearless, not strong...
Blood running through my veins
I live another day.

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My third, And final poem is called, Finale.

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Targeted inside..
No where to run.
Iscolated and trapped...
No reason to live....
Near the light....
Life so short...
Finale is end....

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Thankyou for reading my poems!

I used inner emotion and put all my heart into this.

Please post your thoughts..

Yours Faithfully, Mod x ownedx.

rhyme
02-23-2009, 05:16 AM
You just became a poet Welldone.

boo hoo plz
02-23-2009, 05:18 AM
nice, i like them. :)
my favorite of the three is your third one. :D

not def n00b
02-23-2009, 05:19 AM
lol 1 more,m 3 more :D:D Nice it's cool:)

XX aelita XX
02-23-2009, 05:22 AM
Thankyou very much. Im working on Literary Artist.

rhyme
02-23-2009, 05:27 AM
You "WILL" Achive your goal.

XX aelita XX
02-23-2009, 11:52 PM
Thankyou very much :d