my life

[Baby Post]

my life (ONLY BEGGING NOT FINSHED)

my life is when people talk and cant stop
i clean my room with my broom
people hate you or like you but DONT JUST GO BOOHOO
but people hate and like you in anyway
i always go down by the bay to see the ocean
but my life always go in a motion

what about you?


well thats it hope you enjoyed it!

[fireice]

You have different rhyme scenes so thats not good. Umm get better grammer and it just doesn't interest me right now.

[Sherpa2Chris]

Your style of writing doesn't appeal to me. :(

[Masterlop]

Doesn't sound very good at all. =(