Entry for Literary battle

[G D Pride]

-What Am I-

I sometimes sit up at night,
reminiscing about my past,
thinking about the future,
and if i will come in last,

Im a soar loser,
and yes I'll admit it,
but im never gonna give up,
no I'll never quit it,

I sit back and watch,
as friends and family fade away,
and think about tomorrow,
who will I degrade today,

I open the album,
and I feel so sad,
but this is coming from a kid,
who grew up with no dad.

[Vtec]

A few spelling errors, but overall a good poem.

[G D Pride]

thnk you :)

[Colin]

Should be posted in the Literary Battle thread, you can bump it back up if it is more than one day old since the last post you know ;)

[lionized]

very nice never seen anything like it good job :)

[G D Pride]

Thanks a lot :) I write music haha :p

[G D Pride]

Bump - Been 1 day :)

[Colin]

If this is your entry repost it in the Literary Battle #1 thread.

[G D Pride]

Oh ok thanks :)