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XX aelita XX
02-24-2009, 10:09 AM
Hello!Welcome to my set ofMy newest poems below! Once again itll range in 3 poems. enjoy =)----------------I call My first oneUntill The EndA day too soonNot yet done.A drop of blood.Life never ends.Life is a killer..That lives..Until the end...------------------------------------------Btw im not emo Thought it sound good----------------------------------- My second poem is called,For The Win-----------I always win...Never lose..Hard to beat..Fear to lose.Life to live.Full of fun.But for now...Im not done...-------------My Third and Final Poem is called,A Friendship With Emptyness...---------So alone, So sad..So Trapped, So bad..Your not needed..Not alive...Empty inside.Empty Out..A friendship down..Like a cloud....--------------------Thankyou very much! Please rate and post your thoughts!Mod x ownedx

Qrat
02-24-2009, 10:13 AM
nice, not bad at all.

So3c
02-24-2009, 10:15 AM
yes me too to say :) god

x virusas
02-24-2009, 10:15 AM
nice...................

not def n00b
02-24-2009, 10:16 AM
Gratz again xx nice :) 10/10

KxWarrior
02-24-2009, 10:17 AM
not bad mate :P too short for my true liking but. :D in all essence of the matter, they're really good poems :D

XX aelita XX
02-27-2009, 06:47 AM
Thanks all of u

MusicPrime
03-16-2009, 09:58 AM
:'( that was wonderful :o