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Decadence
02-24-2009, 09:06 PM
We are risen before we fall
Like angels descending to hell
The burning hells a fiery pit

What has become of this world?
We have left it to wither in the cold
Morals crumble under our pride
Pride hardening our hearts as stone

The withering world has caused such pain
Stuck with these thoughts lost in my mind
Locked away like a prisoner of war
Fallen into lies, a bloody trap

G D Pride
02-24-2009, 09:50 PM
Very nice and deep - 8/10

Could use a little better word play tho :p

llama351
02-25-2009, 09:37 PM
Nice work, Fae!

~Dangt351